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Hacking a first draft to bits

Poison at Penshaw Hall by G B Ralph. Book cover image mockup.

I’ve recently started attacking the structural edit for my second cosy mystery, Poison at Penshaw Hall, the sequel to Murder on Milverton Square.

I’ve sliced and diced, splitting and rearranging the scenes from my first draft into a very different order: 7, 14, 15, 16a, 5, 1, 2, 16b, 3, 4, 10, 17–25, 9, 28, 12a, 27, 12b, 28a, 12c, 28b, 28c, 29, 30, 6, 31–36, 11, 37–39, 13, 40…

I know this book will be great fun once it’s been glued back together and all polished up. Please send your good vibes my way to help me get there! And, of course, Kindle ebook pre-order numbers going up always helps to lift the spirits *wink wink*.

Poison at Penshaw Hall by G B Ralph. Book cover image and blurb.

Addison Harper is back, and with another dead body at his feet. Only this time, the entire town saw it happen.

Milverton has been shortlisted for the Terrific Town Award, so a dramatic death at the unveiling ceremony is far from ideal. Addison had only been lending a hand, but now finds himself much more involved than he’d ever hoped. To think his biggest worry before had been his upcoming date with Sergeant Jake Murphy.

As for the Sergeant, he can hardly ignore a hall full of witnesses even if he wanted to. And they’re all pointing the finger at his date, Milverton’s newest arrival, Addison Harper.

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